Friday, February 12, 2010

First CUT!

This piece was taken from a story that I collaborated with three other fabulous writers and I thought it was nice. Tell me what you think.




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“I love you…Amalayah,” was all she heard when Jax stepped to her and held out his hands. He was so handsome. His short close cut hair, his killer blue eyes, and Amalayah thought she’d melt. But where was that coming from? Why was she wanting to touch his roughly stubble face? To hold his body in her hands? Where the hell was that coming from? And why was it showing up now?

“It’s because that’s what I’m feeling for you.” Jax’s voice dropped deep. He gave a smirk. “You can’t know how much I was pissed when you would scream in sweet pleasure for those guys.” His hand grazed her cheek and on contact her lips parted with a sigh. “I won’t take you here because I’m not that kind of male. But I will,” he stepped into her and before his chest touch hers she felt his erection hitting above her navel. More trouble she said to herself. Way bigger trouble. Bigger than Dylan, and that was saying something. That guy wad fucking huge is what was this, gigantic? Jax smiled, hearing her thoughts and backed away, only taking one step. But still Amalayah swore she could still feel the arousal up against her body.

“I’m not like that Amalayah.” Jax placed his hands on his sides., willing the erection to subside. And it would have if Amalayah hadn’t stepped into him and cupped it with her hand.

On the touch, Jax’s mouth opened and his breath left. He leaned into Amalayah’s shoulder and scored her arm. “Don’t,” he groaned against her, “Please don’t do this.”

God, the fact that he was pleading with her made her want him even more. Well, that and the fact that she sensed his want made it ten times more enticing. Amalayah pressed her hand against the rock hard flesh and moaned into his chest. “Why, why should I.” She pressed even more.

Jax held up his head and kissed right below her ear, “Because I can promise you I will not be gentle.” He held her hips in a painful grip forcing the erection hard onto her, “This is no fucking toy. Not like those you’ve had before.”

Amalayah became frightened but that shit turned her on even more. Jax was demanding and forceful. And she was so going to test his theory. Even if he fucked her so badly she went numb she did give rat’s ass.

“I want you to take me Jax.” Amalayah whispered as she began to pop the buttons from his shirt with her teeth. “I want this, “she took him in both hands and he all but bent her spine, “inside me.” Another button skipped across the floor and as she made her way down the shirt she was face to face with indigo blue denim. “Are you going… to do that… for me…Jax.” Amalayah nipped at the fabric of his jeans and Jax let out a sound she’d never heard before. Smiling she undid his belt, then his jeans. Saving time she pulled everything down all at…yeah she was definitely in serious trouble.

Jax looked down at her expression of his cock and he smiled, “If it’s too much I-I-I-I-ohhhh 
shit. “ Taking her hair in his hands he couldn’t believe what she was doing. “Ama…lay…ah” Jax’s voice trembled over the motion of Amalayah’s hot mouth on him. She covered him and felt her tongue round his shaft. How the fuck did she do that? He breathed heavily. Jax felt his release and so did Amalayah, which is why she let go and gave him time to gather himself. As he stumbled a little she got up and after helping him out of his jeans she sat him on the sofa at the window and prayed someone was watching. Jax threw his arms along the back of the chair and watch Amalayah step out of her dress. She had on no bra and surprisingly no panties.

“Do you want…me Jax?” She panted looking down at his arousal as it jumped and jerk between his legs. She smiled and kneeled down to him. “I think…you do.”

“Oh, but ahhhhh, what the…”
She sucked him so hard he knew he’d come in a matter of seconds. “Amalayah, stop!” Jax gasped the demand but Amalayah moved faster, tasting that salty bi of him that escaped it shocked her tongue and she knew she couldn’t stop. Faster and faster her tongue stroked that large vein along his shaft. Her lips held an airless suction on him and he yelled her name. She was not stopping and then felt a cool painful grip on her shoulders. He had held on so tight she was bleeding at the sites of his nail imprints.

Her moans against his tip fucked with his head and his body froze. Jax tried to speak, “Co—Come here!” He pulled at her but she shrugged him off. He heard her protest and that did it. As she came up from her plunge on his tip he pull her up and as quick as flutter of Amalayah’s heart she felt her face against the Persian rug and his mouth on her center. She was so wet she felt herself leak into his mouth. God his tongue touched clit and she bit down on the rug.

“I…told you…this shit was not gonna be like…like those others.” He bit her inner thigh and she came so quick she thought she’d break her fingers holding onto the thin rug. When she went a bit limp he lifted her body, “Oh no! I told you didn’t I? He licked all of her hot middle and then she felt his erection scorching against her opening. And he inched into her she braced her body, “Take it Amalayah!” He slapped her as and she bucked like a stallion, “That’s right. Good girl.” Jax moved back just a little and then swiftly sliced his massive cock inside of her. Right to the base and he was oh, so in.

She was so hot Jax felt his release on the tip of his shaft again but he was not going to come. He was going to make her feel exactly what she needed. “What…do…you…want?” Jax asked as he rode her ass, not letting her slip and inch from his point. Another slap to her ass clapped against the glass and Amalayah wanted to call someone anyone to see what he was doing. The thought of someone seeing him fucking her senseless made her body tickle around his shaft.
Jax reached around and took her left breast into his hand. Nipple like a diamond Amalayah thought he’d snap it off as he rolled it between his thumb and forefinger. That shatter her and she cried out his name, but he pulled out and waited for her to catch her breath. “I want you to feel how it feels to wait.” He breathed and watched her shoulder blades flex under her brown smooth skin.

“Oh, please no…don’t make…me wait.” Amalayah begged more, “I ache…” And it wasn’t from the large size of him.

Jax smacked her ass then shoved himself back into her. It affected him more than it did her. She was sure her ass was the color of a ripe tomato but she’d cross that bridge…if she could walk over it.

“I’m…” Jax moved rapidly in and out, “Shit my love…I’m so coming.” He leaned over her back, not breaking his stride and whispered, “Are you…gonna come…with meeeee ahhhhh, oh FUCK!” Jax slammed his body into hers and she felt a gush on top of her orgasm that took at least two minutes to rock out.

Jax kissed her cuts on both of her shoulder and then down her back. Before her body went lax on now the cold floor, because he had pushed her directly in front of the window, he moved back and licked her one last time. She jerked and almost had no strength to kick out the final orgasm.

The boy had a skill that was totally evil. Which made her smile. That and the fact that she looked across the street and saw a house party that had completely stalled and all eyes were on her and Jax.

He lifted her up and placed her into the bed nestling his wet body right up against her. 

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